2012年下半年剑桥BEC商务英语写作指导(5)

3)作文是关于两个或三个公司比较,选哪个好或者坏的

3) Findings

Firstly

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Thirdly

Furthermore

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Finally三句话使用不同主语，一个是公司一个是顾客一个是原因做主语

4) Conclusion

结果加原因

I recommend choosing T because of the reliability.

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At the moment all customers are not satisfied but many measures have been taken to improve their satisfaction

In my opinion

We are sure to get reply soon after we launch the recruitment campaign.

5) recommendations建议

More staff do not only means more cost, it also means satisfied customers.

We need to recruit 35 new staff, including electrical engineer, software engineer, network engineer and product developers. All they should have at least 2 years’ experience in relevant field.