Original: Some other people think that people should read extensively.

　　Revised: Another position says that people should read extensively.

　　亮点评析
　　同know，believe一样，think也应该尽量避免使用，修改后的句子中是用Another position says that…代替think提出另一种观点，也可以用hold a point of view，hold the opinion这样的短语替换。